Was I a poet then that I believed you
Or am I mad now to doubt
-x-
Whole day the money plant sat talking
To the window panes
The sun smiled on
And when night came
The exhausted stars too did their bit
Until the money plant dozed off
-x-
You brought me a little heart
Crooked n crumpled
And I a fool
Kept it under my pillow
Not knowing it will
Steal all my peace
-x-
The dirt from your eyes
Spills on my plans
And kills your bloody chances
-x-
Rub me rub me the wrong way
How I dare you
Do so…
-x-
The tar is set to conquer memories
The sweeter the worse
To remember
Save! Call in the fireman
Record! I want to play them again
Time replied it’s ok to keep some
And to let go off some
But what if the good is gone
And the bad remains?
-x-
Scavenger, scavenger
Don’t distribute my pieces
Don’t tell my stories
-x-
Restart the brain
Re-pen the thoughts
They have slept for long
-x-
Keep your eyes open
Don’t wink don’t breathe
The mosquitoes might attack
12 comments:
nice quotes ,
your write those words
looks good
Wow.. some of them are nice but some of them are a bit roshesh sarabhai types :)for example that money plant one :D
glad that you like atleast some...m not too familiar with the sarabhais to figure out what you actually meant about the rest...guess you meant they are stupid...lol
oops.. not familiar with sarabhai's? try this..
http://mebibhuti4u.blogspot.com/2008/02/rosheshs-poemssarabhai-vs-sarabhai.html
or a quick search for Google.. assuming Hindi is not a problem :)
'But what if the good is gone
And the bad remains?'
Can't get this line out of my mind.
Beautiful as always, you do know you're gifted, right? I only hope you do :)
Hello! Just bloghopping. Great blog!
Happy blogging! :)
@ scatteredthoughts well i am not pleased with what i found in this link frankly...though i know that Sarabhai vs Sarabhai is a good com....as for my writings was trying my hands at haiku...'the money plant' one i admit actually happens to be quite lame but for reasons unknown it has been liked by quite a few people...
@ sparkling :) tnx u
@ feedmypod..happy blogging to you too...keep dropping in
Nice pics. I love the painting at the top of your blog.
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Well those were my thoughts.. I am no expert in poetry and I openly admit it but I speak my mind and what I feel..
Didnt mean to offend you whatsoever..
@scatteredthoughts hey good that you give honest opinions...I like when people comment...doesn't matter good or bad :)
@Tequila29....tnx but i havn't clicked the first pic...and the header pic i just stumbled upon it
I really liked your article. Keep up the good work.
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